Well, I liked it, I have to say.
I thought the music, as abhorrent as it was, fit the feel of the piece, and to me, the music has to fit whatever it's going to to be a great movie. You obviously worked very hard on this, I can tell. It's good, quality work, albiet a bit sappy. Keep it up, I'd really like to see more.
And no grievous offense meant, your choice in music is horrible. Please try to pick something a little less grating next time, thanks. Good luck.